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Sounds like a Bach prelude at 1:00

This one is to provoke the feeling of a growing sense of anxiety, the most experimental of the things I have posted.

Sounds like a Bach prelude at 1:00

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Lololo, i never found out that XD

(NO WONDER ITS BADASS/I like it = I like Bach/Old piano masterpieces)

This one is to provoke the feeling of a growing sense of anxiety, the most experimental of the things I have posted.

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Elijah, there is one thing that you can change, while keeping your goal of your theme(s)


Its reduce the length of your video.
Or at least dont make it 5min long. No need for 1min shorts but 5min is far far too much.
Even for me, i need to skip 20s by 20s clicking.

The idea is good.
But it is only obvious by you spoiling the idea and by the growing part at 1 and 2min

Thing is, do you know why netorare is liked despite everyone hating it ? Because it is well drawn, and the heroine attractive firsthand. (also due to most good artists bandwagoning to NTR)

What you could have done is make the early part very nice sounding for 30s, and growing bssst like tinnitus gradually slowly.

All that in 2 or 3max min.

Speaking of growing unease, reminds me of this old thing, that is JUST LIKE your video/idea :


Look at how early its so "happy" so jovial
but the ending is pure gruesome abominable horror. (of earth exploding and potentially extinction of humanity)

I think the second one is perfect in length. Then again I am used to listening to music 10+ minutes long.

Another Bach piece it seems. My traditionally composed music sounds closer to this, granted still completely different, let me see if I can find one.

1:22 1:29
Just 7s, but this 7s grip your heart. Unbelievable.

1:12, nothing wrong with the rocket flying, oh wow.
1:13 the sound wavelength change, and the brain intuition feel "wait something changed/is wrong" in 0.01s
1:17 Why the people chasing this astronaut?
1:18 WTF ! (deaths)
1:22 Is the confirmation of your intuition/feelings that the bad thing truly happened

Ok this one is totally perfect.
See, that is what i mean by : i feel sad about your untapped skills. You totally could do good stuff.

But at same time, as i was spoiled that you like discordant noises, i totally could hear the disharmony in it.
A "wait it feels weird, am i hearing it wrong?" as if you were playing voluntarily bad by 1 note(?)(forgot music term for it)

Dissonance is the term. When you grow up with parents who love rock, you get used to it. Most electric guitars for example use dissonance heavily. My traditional compositions are heavily influenced by Bach, Shostakovich, and Liszt but most are either really old, or lost. If I had my other iPad charged I could send myself my more peaceful electronic songs to upload because I have quite a few.

If you can play this, this is a more simple practice piece I made. https://flat.io/score/5b69db4075c5bd3f4395bc19-a-tired-but-good-morning-almost-done

Same here, however these 2 are 3+ years old now. https://flat.io/score/62d9116d4f342e001409f2e9-flying-to-the-sunset

Nice, both, but always have this weird vibe to it ><

2nd one is better, but reminds me of carnivals, and like i said, a weird creepy vibe to it. Like a creepy clown will jump out. Or the circus gonna turn into a blood horror murder scene. (like SAO forcing players to die)

It is because I am forcing my self to remain consonant, however you say it, in those pieces, imo.

I don't have much knowledge about music, but I liked the guitar one. Especially the end part. It starts a tiny bit melancholic (lonely?) but turns more playful later, at least that's how I hear it.

I can see what Tsuru is saying, there is an occasional moment when it seems like a jump scare might happen.

I was practicing call and response with that one. It is meant to feel like you in the morning after a good rest imo.