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Writing wise as well, it is interesting to see how our styles differ. I focus more on dialogue while you on atmosphere. And you have done a good job with it. And looking at the comments, I am glad your readers are able to really delve into it.

I am very envious of your formatting skills, that is one thing I wish I could just steal from ya.

With how the story is going, I would like to see yearnings of this near immortal MC, and hope our evil spirit has more personality than just being cruel.

You are such a good boy~. Maybe you are lying to me, but you words are kind regardless.

Also, the story will look upwards.

And ah, as I mentioned in your comments, I struggle establishing the plot in my story. I struggle moving the plot forward. So I do wanna learn from you how you manage that. Like is there a mini boss I can expect who upon defeat will reveal the final boss. I don't really know any other way of moving the plot forward and I am bad at that one too.

Awa, it's not lying, but it's not the truth either. Themes of possessions avert me a bunch, so I am cherry picking from that a bit. A raw brutal review would be, "Looks promising, but isn't for me."

There are just a lot of ways this story can go, and I hope you would understand this, but a big part of my mind bets that it would be a typical Isekai where the MC keeps killing people but the cruelty is justified everytime; and villains are just MC but more evil which makes the MC look better.

On a plus side, you are clearly able to pull people in. You pull people into this world where they don't have to think that cruelty is bad or down with the monarchy or I hate rich people let all of them did, and stuff like that.

Ever since Arc I not a single person has died so far, so rest assured.

My turn now ah,

You find someone being hunted by a cat. You know the only one who can save one from being hunted by a cat is another cat.

What reason you have for saving this person?

And,
What would this other cat ask in return?

Gah, goth junpscare!

Depends on who the other person is. Surely, the cat would ask for love and shelter.

It must be someone deserving of kindness.

Wa, dear is so strict.

I am a special spirit cat after all.

And you would be saved for sure, if you wonder. You are a bery kind person, after all.

Aish, I am not very good with being positive aa

That is not true at all. You are bery pawsitive.

Believe in yourself~.