My story's first comic

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Hey everyone! My story Sparrow Flight is a fusion between writing and comics, so here's the first few pages of its first comic. The whole story's about a single father who reunites with his children after 10 years of being wrongly imprisoned at the price of being a mercenary. So now he has to balance reconnecting with his kids, the horrors from his work, and trying not to bring work or its horrors home.

You can read the full comic here!




 
EdwinLovato

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Man, your comic is beautiful. The emotions delivered by those expressions and poses.
 
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EdwinLovato said:
Man, your comic is beautiful. The emotions delivered by those expressions and poses.
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Aw, thanks for the kind words man! Honestly I doubted myself a lot with how the comic looks, so I'm really glad that people like it. Knowing I captured their emotions well is a real big compliment too!
 
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That’s a really strong and emotional concept, blending a personal family story with the darker side of mercenary work gives it a lot of depth. I also like the idea of mixing writing with comic panels, it makes the experience feel more immersive.

If you ever plan to expand the comic side or need extra pages, refined paneling, or visual consistency across chapters, I’d love to collaborate. Your story has great potential visually, especially with those emotional contrasts.

Looking forward to seeing more of Sparrow Flight!
 
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