The Shape of Kindness - new chapters and full of British humour

Hi Folks,
I published new chapters of The Shape of Kindness.
Even if you are not into contemporary queer fiction, you might want to have a read to sample of the "notorious" British humour.
Happy writing and reading.


https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2228157/the-shape-of-kindness/

Hello~ I believe this should've been put in the Latest Chapters Discussion forum and not the discussions and writing tips

blackcrowcrowd said:

Hello~ I believe this should've been put in the Latest Chapters Discussion forum and not the discussions and writing tips

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Oh, sorry, I do apologise.

Latest Chapter or Seeking Feedback, depending on your goal with sharing.

CharlesEBrown said:

Latest Chapter or Seeking Feedback, depending on your goal with sharing.

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Not craving for feedback but if someone is keen to help me out with their constructive feedback (not something like it's a piece of crap... haha) I'd be ever so grateful.

Ok here is actual feedback that’s not “it’s crap” like the first feedback I gave you. I don’t like giving feedback on heavily Ai-edited content but now, having skimmed through Chap 6, I have something to say.

You believe letting AI rephrase your prose would elevate it. It doesn’t. You haven’t read enough AI-assisted fic, because if you had, you’d know your work is just one of thousands like it. Mechanical. Forced humor. Forced introspective voice, the way you prompt it.

You have a nice sense of dialogue cadence. I skimmed through and I can see it. Though most people won’t see the human behind the work when it so unmistakably reeks of an ai “voice.”

If you want your work to be read, to be liked, minimize its usage. Stop using those generic phrases ai loves to hammer on. It might read nicely to you now, but it comes across like any other Ai-washed content and a discerning reader will see that.