StudioHira
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hii so me and my best friend mina have been working on this story for a while now and we finally got the courage to post it ?
it's about hana and lyra, two girls stuck working at a sketchy club in osaka. it's dark, it's messy, and it lowkey hurts to write sometimes lol
we'd love some honest feedback!! like does the pacing work? do you care about the characters? is the vibe giving what it's supposed to give?
ohh, and it's multiple pov!
feel free to be harsh, it's the only way to get better!?
In case the Image Link doesn't work! *read here*
it's about hana and lyra, two girls stuck working at a sketchy club in osaka. it's dark, it's messy, and it lowkey hurts to write sometimes lol
we'd love some honest feedback!! like does the pacing work? do you care about the characters? is the vibe giving what it's supposed to give?
ohh, and it's multiple pov!
feel free to be harsh, it's the only way to get better!?
In case the Image Link doesn't work! *read here*
