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    Lively Dialogues

    Can someone explain what "lively dialogues" really means? Of course, I understand that it’s when, while reading or listening, we feel that the characters are alive, not just cardboard cutouts. But I don’t really understand where the line is between what can be called a lively dialogue and what...
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    Looking for Beginner Advice

    Hey everyone! A couple of days ago I bought my first graphic tablet, driven by the (possibly naive) dream of learning how to draw. Maybe I shouldn’t say "learn to draw" in general, more specifically, I want to draw anime characters, and if I live long enough, even try creating splash art...
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    What would you do if you found yourself in the hero's position?

    Imagine this: You were living a happy life with your family until, one day, a woman murdered your entire family before your eyes. From that moment, you lived only for revenge. Years later, you finally found her, but what you saw was nothing like what you imagined: The woman was no longer the...
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    Feedback

    Could someone give me feedback on my fanfic? That is, of course, if anyone feels like reading a fanfic instead of a novel... In general, I write as a hobby, so I haven’t studied various writing rules — I just write the way I like. But I’m curious whether it’s even readable, especially knowing...
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    A well-developed world

    I’m looking for a novella/manga/manhwa with an interesting and well-developed world, where the focus is not so much on the main character but on the world itself, its descriptions, animals, and monsters. Or simply a fascinating, well-crafted magical world.
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    Writer Test: Which One Are You?

    PANTSER... whatever my mind comes up with to the music, that's what I’ll write! And then I think, what have I done... and where is this all going... :blobtaco:
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    Evaluate the idea for a novella

    In my concept, the main characters are both of them. Initially, the main character is the eye, which teaches the girl and leads her to a safe place, for example, by creating illusions that scare the girl, making her run in the direction of the eye (or it creates a green line to guide her), since...
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    Evaluate the idea for a novella

    The main character is the result of an archmage’s experiments on crossbreeding humans with various monsters. She is the result of crossbreeding a human with an ant queen, which gives her the ability to lay eggs through a unique organ in her body and control them. Initially, these are regular...
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