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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Thank you so much for the critique! I really appreciate you spending the time and stating out my weaknesses, now I have a path to work towards. I'll admit, I don't know jack shit about writing theory, structures, stuff like that. I thought writing was just simply depicting an vivid image in your...
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    Guys do I have to clarify that the unarmed I'm referring to is not limbless but someone without...

    Guys do I have to clarify that the unarmed I'm referring to is not limbless but someone without weapons ?
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    After that, the armed person is fucked. Go ahead and send him to sleepy land with ground and...

    After that, the armed person is fucked. Go ahead and send him to sleepy land with ground and pound or lock up a submission (go for that armbar on their sword arm and break it for extra swag!) If anyone's reading this, what are your thoughts about it? Do you think you can take on an armed...
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    Once you take them down, immediately use your shoulder to pin them down as you slide, then use...

    Once you take them down, immediately use your shoulder to pin them down as you slide, then use your weight to pin the sword arm and control that wrist. Work your way into either a full mount or side control, then use your free arm to blast their head with ground and pound until they let go of...
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    One strategy I visualize is maintaining distance, throwing jabs at the space between to provoke...

    One strategy I visualize is maintaining distance, throwing jabs at the space between to provoke a strike from the bladed opponent. What we're looking for is an overhead/downward slash. As soon as those elbows lift up, keep low and charge like a maniac into a double-leg takedown entry. Wrap your...
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    Control their wrist. We can't have them drawing a hidden knife on us as we grapple so we should...

    Control their wrist. We can't have them drawing a hidden knife on us as we grapple so we should maintain wrist control of their sword arm as we pin them to the ground with our grappling.
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    Distance management is key. Just because they have the longer reach, doesn't mean that you can't...

    Distance management is key. Just because they have the longer reach, doesn't mean that you can't manage distance. Use your footwork, maintain distance and let them chase you, take note of their attack patterns from afar.
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    Prioritize grappling against long bladed weapons. They have the reach advantage and lethality...

    Prioritize grappling against long bladed weapons. They have the reach advantage and lethality advantage. No way you can trade punches and kicks with that distance. Just like fighting someone with a clear reach advantage, you have to force yourself in, even if it meant eating shots.
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    Wear the best armor you can get. You are going to get hit, and when it comes to weapons, they...

    Wear the best armor you can get. You are going to get hit, and when it comes to weapons, they are deadly everywhere. You have to come in with the mindset that you have to die to win.
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    LOL omg, I didn't expect to have people welcoming me. Thank you guys! I appreciate it!

    LOL omg, I didn't expect to have people welcoming me. Thank you guys! I appreciate it!
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    A common theme I tackle with my story is how would an unarmed person faced an armed person...

    A common theme I tackle with my story is how would an unarmed person faced an armed person? Usually, the odds are 9 out of 10 in favor of the armed person, but don't lose hope! I'm here to cook a path to victory for us unarmed people!
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    Hi! Thanks for checking my page out. Not sure if anyone would, though LOL.

    Hi! Thanks for checking my page out. Not sure if anyone would, though LOL.
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    Review Swap! Looking for martial arts themed stories!

    Aww, thank you! I'm a newbie myself and I never would have thought of giving someone inspiration in writing a story the same way as how I got mine, from reading a fucking banger of a story so I really appreciate it :blob_teary:. Please let me know once the character goes live! I bet he'll be as...
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    Review Swap! Looking for martial arts themed stories!

    (Posted this one as a sample of how my feedback would be! I'll still be reading up to chapter 7 of yours ofc!) Chapter 3 Liu Heng vs Han Zhiran -Liu Heng's style actually has a similar one in Boxing! It's popularized by the legend Tommy Hearns, known as the Hitman Stance (Left arm folded in...
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    Review Swap! Looking for martial arts themed stories!

    Sure! Take your time, I'll be looking forward to it ?? Gotcha! I'll check it out when I have free time ?
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