Recent content by YuriIto

Hello Ruti, Thank you for taking the time to reply. Thanks to all your opinions, I can see more clearly the future of my chapters. I really appreciate it.

Thank you for taking the time to read the chapter. In all honesty, I was following the advice of someone I asked to proofread the story. They were concerned about the 'tone' and suggested some changes. This is my first story, and I felt the need to make everyone happy. Thank you very much for...

Thank you for your feedback ♥ I appreciate it. :s_smile: Thank you, I was so worried about being reported that I failed to pay attention to other details. ?

Hello @Omnifarious, Thank you for taking the time to reply. The easiest way to address your question would be to suggest you read the chapter I posted in my original comment. That way, you will have the context for my question. In this chapter, I introduce the dark side of my story, which will...

Hi Melchi, Indeed it is, and the ambiguity comes from the POV that what is a lot for some may not be for others. Therefore, I framed the question this way because, in the end, if I gather enough feedback, I can see the direction in which I could incline the dark side of the story. I invite you...

Thank you very much for your replies ♥ @HuaiChi @ZukoMee ?

Hello, I'm new here. Nice to meet you all ♥ I decided to come to you with a simple but, at the same time, complicated question: How much is too much? More specifically, I'm writing my first story, and everything is already assembled in my head, but I'm afraid it might touch on very sensitive...