Recent content by YS_og

Finally finished part 2. Again, way too much respect for comic artists after this exhausting bit. No more comic drawing for me :blob_dizzy: :sweating_profusely: https://tapas.io/episode/2497084

Thanks yall! :blob_joy: yeahhhhh probably would <_< CSP, along with a host of tools I have collected over the months from CSP Assets If you do decide give it a try, holler so I can follow along as well! And yeah that's the effect I was hoping for because we all know comics attract more...

I don't know if these kinds of promotional approaches are worth it, but tried anyway. I figured to try something new to garner more attention elsewhere with how niche the genre is, and wow the whole exhausting process makes me see how bad I am at comic writing (and also why I am glad I never...

Thanks yall :blob_joy:

Finally got a full-faced featured mech (which I still have such a hard time drawing :blob_cringe:) Does it still not look very "Book Cover"-ish? I might be able to draw individual pieces but if it's still not quite right I'd love some feedback so I can continue to tinker with it. TIYA...

Ahh cool was waiting for yours and DRS's chapter updates but yeah if you edited anything I will give it a look-see

Just reviving as I made some amends to the 1st two chapters. I am still open to reviewing anyone's work even if it isn't necessarily "ACTION" genre, and I can review as many chapters as you are willing to do for mine. I just don't do Romances or smut.

So you have seen all of the ones recommended? Not sure if that is aimed at everyone or aimed at someone in specific.

I mean, it's the MC. You can always make sure they're the main focus of the group by doing as MissPaige said. But my question is, are you having them all talk at once like having several smaller conversations amongst each other like what happens sometimes in real life? If so, you can always have...

People have suggested writing an outline and I agree, and I will also add on to that. I highly recommend writing not just the overall plot events as labels or points but actual chunks of writing and dialogue so you can reference both the event AND the tone/style later on. During this you can...

This is a good way to put it. I think too many mysteries piling up quickly makes things too ambiguous and become more of a put-off than a hook. I think having multiple mysteries is great, but maybe 1 at a time? Meaning don't throw the next mystery in until some of the 1st one is discovered (even...

I see, well it was coincidental I guess :blob_sweat: I can offer this from just the few you have uploaded, but I could give more detailed feedback once more comes out. First and foremost, I realize the language barrier issue and I will skip around that for now. But most importantly, I see...

Thanks for the review! You mean you've seen this posted in Tapas? I never got good commentary there which is why I am glad to have come here lol Yeah as you can see from earlier reviews I definitely have lots of sentence structure points written down for edits coming real soon, and you help...

Right, I do have a new cover art planned. This is exactly my own thoughts after x months passed :( My break coming up is to do everything I need to: edits, art, cover art, everything in between that isn't new chapters ^^; Good point! I will do just that! Yeah thats definitely understandable. I...