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    Superhero Themes and Cliches

    So the characters slowly overcomes their past is realistic?
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    Superhero Themes and Cliches

    What are the common superhero themes? What are its cliches?
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    Beta Readers Needed for My First Volume

    Hello, everyone. I completed my first volume of my brand new series. If you're interested in it, here you go and enjoy it. Please let me know if you struggle to have access to my manuscript. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nC-3wmLVBY7lrNyGxj-I0ujp4UWyzHiulZHEr0gGNoo/edit?usp=drivesdk
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    Looking for beta readers

    I can beta read yours if you can read mine. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nC-3wmLVBY7lrNyGxj-I0ujp4UWyzHiulZHEr0gGNoo/edit?usp=drivesdk
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    Extra Content Name

    I'm mostly making a bonus chapter that's not related to the main plot of the series.
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    Extra Content Name

    Hello, everybody. I'm trying to think of a name for my sci-fi fantasy extra content in my new light novel series, that Manga does at the end of the main story. One's is Galaktar and another one's Aniva. I can't decide which one's better. Please help.
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    The Mii Character

    Does making a story about a Mii character a fan fiction or an original?
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    Nanowrimo

    Is participating in Nanowrimo a good idea for your web novel? If yes, have you paticipate in Nanowrimo this year? Does participating in Nanowrimo 2022 help you with improve your web novel series in terms of plot, scenes, characters and overall story?
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    Protagonist's Back Story

    But I want to make a superhero story. Like making her survive the war, her crappy aunt and uncle from her dad's side, her friends' betrayal in Elementary and Lower Secondary which makes her paranoid about a warlike environment and making new friends?
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    Protagonist's Back Story

    Okay, well can I make her backstory about her surviving the war, become an orphan, be raised by her crappy aunt and uncle from her dad's side, and have her friends betray her in Elementary school and Lower Secondary which makes ger become paranoid about war and making new friends then? Okay...
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    Protagonist's Back Story

    Excuse me, but do you guys think my protagonist has a back story or not? If she doesn't, how do I rewrite it? Here it is: During her first eight years, Hanna didn't have any playmates due to her mother breaking social norms of her own free will. Her mother gave Hanna snacks, talks to Hanna...
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    The 27 Chapter Method

    Does using the 27 chapter method makes the series repetitive in volumes 2 and later? I'm just asking out of curiosity.
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    Volume 1 of New Series

    I made a story plot for volume 1. What do you guys think? Is it good or bad? If it isn't, how do I fix it? Table of Content Year Two Actticus-September *Act 1: Dangerous School Grounds* Chapter 1: A Horrible First Day of School Introduction=Hanna arrives at her Advisory class late and was...
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    Part 2 of Chapter 1 of a New Series

    Here's part 2 of chapter 1. What do you think of it and what needs to be improved?
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