Recent content by yasa

Oh dang, I never expected such a detailed review. :sweating_profusely: So basically, it's the same thing I've been having problems on for the last year or so. Hmmmmm. Tenses have never really been my strong suit, and I really don't know how to fix them at the moment. The ellipses was spot on...

A review and medication?! Had I hit a jackpot?! Ehem. I'll happily drink while waiting. :blob_melt:

Hello dearest Gabrielle, My sincerest greetings to you! Well, uh, despite my quite elegant opening, unfortunately I'm the farthest from elegant. In fact, I indulge in ornate vulgarity! Ehem. Ehem. Let me not be weird for at least one second and ask you the question why I had beset upon this...

It's barely even a harem though, plus there's nothing resembling that for the next 50+ chapters or so Mmhmm, it's not necessarily about what exiting thing that happens since it's mostly about the exploration of politics and philosophy and such, some psychology too, so it's very niche and rarely...

Cool cool. My story is on the niche end, so I'm fine with the story not getting much viewers tbh. Yeah, that's what I tried to fix for a few months now. Been trying to make things clearer without loosing too much of the supposed to be confusing stuff. Seems like I still have to work on that...

Here. Be traumatized. :blob_melt:

Well, uhhhhhhhhh, here :blob_hide: Ehem. Since I've already taken some reviews from Tempokai and in Stoneink's, you could have mine in low prio also. Up to you tbh. I'm happy with anything that I'll get. :blob_melt:

Oh damn. Was just nutted on by Tempokai a few days ago. Seems like I'm torturing both the characters and the readers too much from the feedback I got. :sweating_profusely: Though I would like to hear from another perspective to see if I could traumati- I mean intrigue you with my story. In...

Ight, I laughed at this one. Spot on. Though I did want to hear whether I'm either sadistic monster or one that genuinely thinks this is how to get sympathy. Well, I did get my answer. Hehe. Time to write more suffering then. :blob_melt:

Guess I'll drop mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1404379/mockery-of-once-innocent-delusions/

This place is a mess. It's great. Made me wanna actually look into the forms here. It would be funny to see how ass my story is to other people's eyes in comparison to how ass I think it is (it's hot garbage, so eh), would like to know your thoughts...