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    First Chapter Story Feedback

    https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/40309/id-tech I would like your opinion on this please.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/40309/id-tech Here's my story. Feedback please :)
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    I.D. Tech New Book Need Feedback (Sci Fi Crime Drama)

    Thanks for the feedback. I mostly have experience writing in third person. As for the flashbacks and stuff I kind of see what you are saying. There's quite a few of them.... But they do tie into the story.
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    Sites for free art (CC)?

    Deviantart
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    I.D. Tech New Book Need Feedback (Sci Fi Crime Drama)

    Awesome man glad to hear it. :) Stuff like this inspires me to write more.
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    I.D. Tech New Book Need Feedback (Sci Fi Crime Drama)

    Cool. Thanks man.
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    I.D. Tech New Book Need Feedback (Sci Fi Crime Drama)

    So anyways I'm new to this site so I just posted my book and it has to get reviewed... The first 2 chapters are coming to this site. Frankly I'm tired of waiting so I'll just post the link to where I have the most chapters posted. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/40309/id-tech So anyways...
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