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Xxizl replied to the thread [Research and Experiment] What do you think is the moral of this story?.That's right everyone, make it today's mission to pet at least one dog.
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Xxizl reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread [Research and Experiment] What do you think is the moral of this story? with
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Xxizl replied to the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve!.Thank you! I appreciate it.
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Xxizl reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve! with Like.
Thankfully, I'm very unapologetic and I don't care how successful someone is or not. I'm also lazy. So here's my quick, unbiased...
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Xxizl replied to the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve!.Thank you! I'll keep that in mind!!
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Xxizl reacted to Rookieqw's post in the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve! with Like.
You are a better author than I'll ever be, so I can't help you in terms of grammar and story. Keep going! But people had taught me that...
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Xxizl reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Looking for feedback. Tell me what I could improve! with Like.
Honestly... I have no comment. Your fiction is already quite competitive in SH's trending (mine doesn't even deserve a mention). If you...
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Xhttps://www.scribblehub.com/series/2188101/the-young-masters-maid-talks-too-much/
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Xxizl reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread I hope you read my novel *The Exodia Saga* and provide any feedback for improvement. with Like.
Well, I have some feedback to improve your fiction packaging for engagement: (1) Create a structured chapter numbering format to make...
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XHello everyone! I recently started posting my story SPARROW FLIGHT here. It's a writing x comic fusion project about a single dad trying...
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Xxizl reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread First-Person POV or Third-Person / Author POV? with Like.
I closed my eyes to the second example. Which is better, the first POV or the third POV? The short answer is, it depends on your...
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Xxizl replied to the thread First-Person POV or Third-Person / Author POV?.It really depends on your goals with the story and how you would like to present it. First person allows for the audience to immerse...
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Xxizl replied to the thread Tried drawing a Cat for the First time.Super deep voice: “I desire the wet food tonight, Mother.”
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XImagine if your cat turned into this shit and you find it standing over your bed looking down on you first thing you wake up lol. And...
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Xxizl replied to the thread Tried drawing a Cat for the First time.How does the lighting make it even scarier 😭