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    Need feedback on my story.

    I am terrible at writing about feelings, but when you tell me, I think something went wrong... I was trying to make him a bit crazy. But he would be normal later in the third book by losing his friends for the same reason (killed by someone). but he is not schizophrenic but a psychopath in that...
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    Need feedback on my story.

    The problem is that i don't live in Russia for moment. But I will try to check your book, even if my english isn't good
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    Need feedback on my story.

    Ну например самиздат и тому подобное, да? Я бы с радостью, но хочу издать свою книгу не как российскую, желательно японскую, но не вариант. А русская аудитория, в моем понимании, недолюбливает новых российских авторов. Ну а Wattpad потому что первое что дошло. Ну скоро начну публикацию и на...
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    Need feedback on my story.

    1. Ayo, you speak russian? I do prefer to write in russian, but it looks like some sites are nor progressed like this one (exept for ranobelib and some more) or do have much rules about the quality (have learn reading and writting by reading books, cuz I left from russia when I was 9, after...
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    Need feedback on my story.

    Yes, thank you so much, it is even better
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    Need feedback on my story.

    HI, thank you fro reading and writting back you opinion, you can't imagine how important it is to me, I'm not joking. I wrote the novel in russia and it is mine frist one (I published on wattpad first). Explaining and writing about feelings is very hard for me, therefore the feeling part is...
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    Need feedback on my story.

    I started to write not so long ago and ain't writing in English, therefore, my translation may be bad, it is translated via a translator. I will try to translate the other chapters on my own. I do only have 2 chapters, a prologue, and my first chapter. The link is to my book: Redemption Of Sins...
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    Looking for feedback

    My English knowledge is lacking, but I will try to read.
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