Recent content by Wednesdayschild

Having done both, I can't see the connection.

Interaction with others reveals the blind spots we don't see.

I'll try my luck. This is my story of which I have posted three chapters to get started: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1877255/julie/

Oh dear! It sounds like I'm on a different planet. :s_eek:

Your synopsis presents a strong dystopian framework, but it risks relying too heavily on familiar tropes unless you distinguish it through a sharper thematic focus or greater character depth. While it already has philosophical potential, particularly concerning language, religion, enforced unity...

I don't rate my writing; I just write. It's for others to rate my writing.

What is Loli? Does it have to do with Lolita, as it has been suggested? I think there are a lot of abbreviations used here that are unfamiliar. Is there a list somewhere?

I wrote as a child after moving from the countryside to a town. I hated living there and was always looking for a way out. The school I had been at was so good that I mourned leaving it, and the new school was a horrible place for me. At first, I had to deal with being bullied and was fortunate...

It is also repetitive and boring. The storylines are often morally questionable, and the characters have no depth.

I'm new here, so I can't really say. I only know that my wife says I write better than 90% of what comes out of Hollywood. But she would :s_wink: What confuses me here is that the genres don't seem to be very strict, and I find young fiction in all of them. As an older writer, my style is...

Hi! I'm new here. I'm a Brit living abroad who has been writing profusely since retiring. I will post some things here that I haven't posted on Substack. I hope to find some other authors who share my interests and some who open up my horizons.