Recent content by wad

I read three chapters, prologue, chapter 1, and chapter 2, and these are my thoughts. First off your synopsis... I’m not sure why you included the “What is fate?” part. For a synopsis, you want to tell the reader what your story is about in the first two sentences. In my opinion, I would...

So, I read half of Chapter 1, and here are my thoughts. First off, the chapter is way too long. 10k words for a single chapter is extremely high for this platform. Most authors here usually range between 1.5k and 3k words for there chapters. Definitely fix that. The opening was decent. The...

Genre: Progression Fantasy URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1363293/muscle-cultivation-i-will-become-reality/ Feedback Level: 1 Other: It’s a bit out there... plus, there's cultivation. Maybe keep the vodka within reach, just in case.

Lmao, thanks for the roast. I have no idea what I am doing, I don't have any notes about world building or great writing prose like these other authors do. I just kind of write whatever comes to mind. The stuff you wrote about about the synopsis was fairly eye opening. I had thought what I had...

Relatively new writer, just finished reading your "Dao of Rhetoric," and would love some feedback. A Record Of A Bodybuilder's Journey To Ascension