Recent content by Vibroblade

Thanks, my man. I fixed most grammar issues you pointed out. I'll see what I can do about the ellipsis, I don't know what I can do to fill the void of just waiting for time to pass or a longer than usual pause in the novel. I felt like putting it into text or filling it with thoughts would feel...

Hello there, when you find some time, consider my novel for reviewing. It's two chapters in thus far, I'd like to fix anything bad right away so that I don't have to edit retroactively later xd. No need to be gentle, if something stinks or induces headaches please do tell...