Recent content by Vertrex

Okay. For The Life of the Phoenix Titan, I scrapped the chapters 1 to 4 that I released here and replaced them with a compressed chapters 1 to 3 that are fast paced and focuses more on the important details to progress the story on. I hope they are better and to the point as advised by Hathnuz...

Thank you very much! :D Okay. I guess I'm being too descriptive, explaining away a lot of things and writing too much into it. Well, I thought it was towards world building, but I suppose my readers are not really interested in that. :confused: Yeah. I'll work on that! Thank you for your...

Hello people. Just putting my stories out there for the public to know. The Life of the Phoenix Titan My explanation: Basically, it follows the life of a newly born baby and his parents name him Lakshman. From there, the story follows his growth in whatever he does, he may experience, whatever...

Hello readers. This is a thread that I made to request readers to submit any feedback they have for my stories and if there are any suggestions people want to give me on making improvements, please let me know here. I'll gladly accept any and all help and adapt accordingly. (y) List of stories...

Here's something that could help you understand the differences between those two: https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/intermediate-grammar/past-perfect Also, I don't see the problem in writing in past perfect. Judging from the article I linked, I also write in past perfect because it flows...