Recent content by Verdante

Working on my Chapter 19. Work & life’s been stressful recently & I feel like I’m fighting myself as I’m writing/editing this chapter :blob_teary:

Having good art isn’t enough to make me want to sit through the whole story. If I want to read/watch about a badass mc in dungeons, I’d much rather reread/rewatch The King’s Avatar

Mine’s tradition vs change. Certain arcs focus on a different look at this theme. Here’s a few of mine: ‘How badly do things need to go for someone to accept what worked for them doesn’t anymore?’ ‘What happens when you change too quickly and reject the system that got you where you are?’...

1/04/2024. I managed to edit a total 1,300 words yesterday and today :blob_aww:. Still halfway through finishing a whole chapter, but hopefully I finish it by today

Congrats on a productive day 1! I finished my rough draft for a chapter today, finished reading a volume of a book and did some chores! If I have time, I’m gonna do more planning for my next arc :blob_melt:

I have a lot and I’m already getting headaches thinking about it LOL. I might have to change it to something even smaller eventually. 1. Write & edit 3000 words a week. 2. Read 52 Books this year. 3. Write multiple short stories/one shots as practice/fanfic. 4. Find a writing group eventually...

You’re welcome! Goodluck with your work :blob_okay:

Oh, I see. It’s fine to leave it as is then :blob_okay: And you’re welcome!

Okay! I'm going to put this under spoiler since you said it's an excerpt from a recent chapter. Did you edit the excerpt? It's shorter than I remember :er_what_s:. I'm fine with what you had earlier, I just haven't gotten the time to sit down and read through the whole thing! Feel free to...

It makes sense now that you explained it, but I wouldn't have gotten that meaning from the paragraph since he was thinking about one subject (the pendant) and how he was grateful for it saving his life but then shifts to thinking about another (the worthlessness of the battle) without a clear...

I’m going to first summarize what I think is happening in the scene, so feel free to correct me here if I get anything wrong. Callid is one of the 400 knights dispatched to fight against the vampire girl and the beast demon. Callid mentioned a precious pendant that saved him in the past. The...

I’m back shamelessly stealing ideas from Reddit :blobthumbsup:. The title says it, share any 333 word excerpt of your story and I’ll tell you what I think! I’m not a grammar person, so don’t expect that. I will tell you what I think about your character/s, the flow of your scene and other things...

As a very disorganized person, outlines and bullet points work great for me so I don’t go completely off tangent. I pull up a nice ambience music as I’m writing and search through YouTube for tips. I ask forums/discord/reddit for help if I’m stuck on a particular scene (thank you for everyone...

Yeah. It’s tricky to find a balance between making it immersive with details and showing MC’s thoughts while still keeping it fast paced :blob_teary:

Thank you!!