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    First Person or Third Person for a narrator

    actually i am more into the story. i have published a prologue and blur check it out if your interested. link : https://www.scribblehub.com/series/651552/obsolete-humans/ i am going to change the prologue to include 2 key points of the story. I plan to publish chapter this month. Thanks again...
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    First Person or Third Person for a narrator

    Thanks again for your advice. I am going for exactly what you said a wide world view for at least the first couple of volumes of my story. Thanks for helping me clear my mind.
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    First Person or Third Person for a narrator

    Hi, I want to add a narrator to my novel as an anchor to help keep track of the story. Any recommendations on which point of view should i choose third or first person. This character will be a key character of the story then die and remain as AI consciousness. If that makes any difference...
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    Feedback on new published story - prologue

    Thanks so much i will update my prologue. I also check out your prologue story. About time travel. Happy New Year
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    Feedback on new published story - prologue

    Thanks for the support. Much appreciated.
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    Feedback on new published story - prologue

    Hi, to all. My name is Valarie Valentinne a new writer who wants to share with as my people, my disable relative's real life inspired novel. Also this is my first time writing a novel so i apologise if there are errors. I would love to hear from your feedback on the prologue. check out...
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