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thank you sir.

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/556949-armageddon-book--evolution/chapter/566984/ Review mine please I linked chapter 2 but start from chapter one please

omg i totally believe u about the " I did this a lot when I first began writing myself, so listen to me when I say for you to toss out those phrases altogether." Because I noticed that I subconsciously started to remove the "then" and just right into it. Thanks for all ur criticism I just...

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/556949-armageddon-book--evolution/chapter/560326/ If could check out my first chapter, I would appreciate it

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https://www.scribblehub.com/read/556949-armageddon-book--evolution/chapter/560326/ 500 Words I appreciate all feedback.

thank you soo much brother i appreciate this

Okay, thanks for the help and the feedback that third person first-person thing always did trip me up when i just started to write Ill focus on fixing that first. W critique

please read mine-https://www.scribblehub.com/series/546088/pete-ink/

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check mine out please its like 800 words-https://www.scribblehub.com/series/546088/pete-ink/

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Read my shit please just 3 chapters so far-https://www.scribblehub.com/series/546088/pete-ink/