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I would love some feedback on mine! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/672659/i-became-a-mother-in-another-world/

I would love some feedback on mine if the offer is still open https://www.scribblehub.com/series/672659/i-became-a-mother-in-another-world/

Holy shit, you managed to glean more of my story from the first chapter than I thought possible. I won't say which parts though ? I suppose that's the perk of being an experienced writer/reviewer. Thanks again for the detailed reply. I'll definitely take your points into account. Especially...

Wow! First of all, thank you so much for such an in-depth analysis. I appreciate it. About the lover. It never occurred to me to set him up as a mystery man because his being her lover will be relevant later in the story. And about TEA, yes, they will be relevant later. Much later. Info dump...

Hello! Is this offer still standing? If so, I would love some feedback on mine. I have a prologue before the first chapter but it's a very small one. I Became a Mother in Another World