I like the story so far. I've read the first two chapters and they are great. Some of the wording could be adjusted but its fine overall. Besides the wording I was drawn into the story pretty well. Nothing broke me out of the story.
Your story doesn't have to be mature but a fellow smut connoisseur is preferred.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/427988/monster-girl-waifu-book-of-lilium/