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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Thankyou for your feedback! I will start working on basics
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    Free feedback thread.

    Okay, I'll listen to your suggestion and ask for more opinion and at same time will work on descriptions. Thank you!
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    Free feedback thread.

    First of all, thankyou for your feedback. I will make changes and correct the typos and formatting. As for repetitions and weird phrases, I will make changes in first 2 chapters and will make sure to keep that in mind while writing in future. I have few questions in mind, I hope you can...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Hii there! Could you take a look at my new book? I have attached the link below. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/891337/world-reawakened-the-supernatural-uprising/ Thankyou your help is much appreciated
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Hello there! Could you please review my new book? I have attached the link below https://www.scribblehub.com/series/891337/world-reawakened-the-supernatural-uprising/ Thankyou; your assistance is greatly appreciated.
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