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Damn, I actually skimmed all of that. rip invisible dragon, you were goated.

And then the invisible dragon killed the goat and was like HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA SCREW GOATS!

Indeed, the fun in reading (imo, I can't represent others) is growth. And mister Mother's Milk here has none if he has super strength on...

Add personal stakes and a down-to-earth background to make your readers care. For example, your protagonist is a poor, loving older...

That sounds a lot like the second major arc (and only one I've heard most of) in My Werewolf System - except it's his mother and sister...

See to me thats kneecapping your own story. The whole point is you want him to feel bad, or at least to grapple with something...

It's a cliché, but it's quite effective in engaging the reader's emotions. Personally, I'd prioritize seeking out novels with a...

And note, I'm saying the "almost unbeatable fighter kills in the arena to make money to take care of his mom and sister" is what felt...

I was reminded of Chrome Shelled Regios Though technically, MC was blackmailed into losing the fight, which will result in him losing...

Zack when go to underground fighting ring he would find people with power like him. He wouldn’t instantly win every fight and the fights...

And then he fights the invisible dragon but the invisible dragon is like HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FOOL YOU NOBODY CAN BEAT ME! and then...

Ah, so it's immediately better. Objectively.

No idea! Its a Manga that has almost this exact plot but with girls.

What does the A stand for? Ah, I see. I still feel like no one would agree to fight him once he became reputable. Anyway, what would...

STAR: Strike It Rich