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Well, good luck. I'll be looking forward to seeing how you transform your narrative into something more in-depth from Lila's...

I understand! This was so enlightening, thank you. 😭🙏🏻 It’s too late for me to do it tonight but tomorrow I’m going to go back through...

Well, now I'll explain what I felt as a reader when reading chapter 1. Honestly, the atmosphere of your chapter 1 was good. The...

Well, I agree with you. The limited third POV is right in line with your narrative goal, where you want the reader to connect with the...

😱 that was definitely not my intention!! She’s supposed to be a distinct character, a medical student that has been dropped into another...

The idea was to be third person limited, as if we are directly in Lila’s mind experiencing the world alongside her. I chose that POV...

Hello everyone! I just discovered ScribbleHub and posted the first ~7 chapters of my story. I haven’t had anyone (beta) read it yet so...

Here’s mine! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2252300/nerim-path-to-ascension/