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Cause, I'm The Son. The Chosen One and I m also The Forgotten One. With MBG and 19 Mill Job I will make the world remember me

It do what synopsis must do, so it's pretty good. You can omit that part. Between And Those two are the same thing just phrased...

1.i think I did something like Aether, first off I write in my mother language and translate it into English, after that I edit the text...

Jack Wilson was just an ordinary clown — the kind you might see at a children's party or a small park performance. Until the day he...

is it still too much? What do you think, should I change the whole thing or try to reduce it? I will fix it later for now I have to work...

19 million job opening, where? Oh, I forgot about that. Yes, if you don't give me honest feedback, my promise of 19 million jobs will...

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Really, I appreciate it if you still doing it As Vice President, I order you to review my story and give me your honest opinion, or...

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Thank you, I’m really glad you enjoyed the story. I truly appreciate the review — it helps a lot. I wish you the best with your writing...

I have taken the time to read your novel, and I have to say, it is incredibly interesting! I went ahead and left a genuine review on...

If you think this is how English writers write their books, the first step is to pick up a book written by a human, not an overloaded...

I'm not going to criticize you for using AI or writing with a pencil or anything. But consider the reading experience. Saying 'this is...

By adding in longer and more varied sentences you improve the staccato feel when you do use it. It's the same for the overuse of any...

Thanks for the feedback. I’ve revised some of the earlier chapters to improve the reading flow. I’d appreciate it if you could let me...