Thank you! And that makes sense, I've looked back at some of the earlier chapters and realized how much I think things improved as it went along. I am looking to divide it into books so will likely revise the first 10 chapters once the first book is done.
*update- Actually - I just reread the...
I have been working on my series, the first I have done, and have 24 chapters live (233 pages). I would love some feedback from anyone who has read it or who decides to read it.
Please let me know what you think! I wanted to right something that was in the harem/smut genre but that featured...