Recent content by thelastrune14

I really appreciate you taking the time to break things down. I get what you mean about tone, pacing, and making Evan more active in the story. I’m still learning, so your advice is super helpful, and I’ll work on making the next chapters tighter and more exciting. Thanks again for pointing...

Hey everyone! I’m learning to write fiction and have just started my first story. It’s about Evan, a newbie mage getting his first wand, and things get wild with two girls who are kinda obsessed with him—one’s a vampire who remembers her past life! Only 5 chapters are done so far, and there...