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TheKillingAlice reacted to Ararara's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with
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Not requesting a review, just thanking u for the community service. The feedback you're giving here is pure gold, and a joy to read... -
TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open].I'm guessing I will line up to be destroyed. :blob_cookie: Please look at this one, kind Ma'am. I thank you very much for the work you...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
Sorry... :blob_hide: Here you go.. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1903686/building-world-peace-with-my-bloodthirsty-demon-army/
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Rejected Cover.I do see the cover. I don't know, maybe it's because yours is more "suggestive" than the others, which show a similar amount of...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
You tried, you really did, but it wasn’t enough for me. The abstractness of the description was constant, consistent, persistent. It...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
Hmm. Let me start with what I dislike, quoted below: Yes. First paragraph. You hit me with a stock description. Then you redeemed...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Haha.
Reopening this because I’m bored, but I want to stress one thing: if you think you can fool me with your llm generated story, think...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Haha.
There is no strict format for my feedback, but here is my general approach: I read your synopsis, then I read Chapter 1 until I stop...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread Would you read it?.Bold of you to assume I'd want to read the story now, in order to figure out if I want to read the story. :blob_cookie: I'm an asshole...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to lizzyrose's post in the thread What’s one mistake you made early as a writer that you wish you avoided? with Like.
What’s one mistake you made early as a writer that you wish you avoided? I feel like I’m probably making a lot of them right now...
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TheKillingAlice replied to the thread What’s one mistake you made early as a writer that you wish you avoided?.One? :blob_cookie: And well, I'm pretty sure I'm still making mistakes. As long as I don't recognize them, I can't really do anything...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to AliceMoonvale's post in the thread Which forums did you use to frequent before joining Scribblehub? with Like.
None. I don't even know why I'm here.
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TheKillingAlice reacted to Ace_Sorou's post in the thread How traumatized is your main character? with Like.
I just realized that within the span of three days, my protagonist has gone through no less than four near death experiences, and...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to toapat's post in the thread How traumatized is your main character? with Like.
Probably. --- My main character is someone forced through circumstance and tragedy to become something she is not mentally capable of...
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TheKillingAlice reacted to A-Random-Writer's post in the thread How traumatized is your main character? with Like.
My main character watched his mother and others get mowed down by gunfire and he fell into the bodies.