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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I still haven't decided what tenses I should be using to this day, I just write and let auto correct do its thing, though it seems like auto correct doesn't always register the error and doesn't correct it. As for the POV, I intend to stick to third person...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hi, first time replying on these types of forum, I usually don't engage on forums but it doesn't hurt to post my story here. I write for fun and this is actually the first story where I would actually try to finish it for once, so my focuses is on the actual chapters, sorry if the short and bad...
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