Recent content by TheEternalScholar

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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hey, Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate you taking your time to help out. As for the story telling, it will expand naturally, the world the politics. Honestly, I have planned out a very long series, to get to the end goal that I know, it will take probably 25 books. However, I've got...
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    Recommendations Novels with beautiful physically strong and muscular general female characters

    Well, I can't say I have unrealistically strong female characters (no lifting boulders, bending steel or anything like that). My novel is focused on a fantasy Early Greco-Roman world, main characters are males, but there are a lot of strong female characters who are captains of the guard and...
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    Recommendations No harem

    Hey there Pyrtzii, and anyone else who may find interest in this So I just released the first 6 chapters of my novel which I will post the link below. I hope it fits what you are looking for, there are multiple POV's, and I am always looking for more people to help me refine my work. Every...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hey there Trinary, I would appreciate some feedback on the first chapter if you have the time. Is it fine if I split it into parts 1 and 2, it really does help when I go back and re-edit the chapters to perfect my work. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/273830/lineage-rise-of-an-empire/stats/...
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