Hey,
thanks for pointing that out—you're totally right. I ended up rewriting the entire thing after some rough self-reflection and feedback.
Here, this should be a link to the rewritten one:
Its called Spectra: Reincarnated Anomaly
Hey everyone.
I’ve recently started posting a story that means a lot to me, and I wanted to share it here to see if it resonates with anyone.
? Title: The Spectrum of My Second Chance
Genre: Reincarnation, Fantasy, Emotional Growth, Power System
Short Summary:
A young man dies saving a...