Recent content by The_Twelve_LightNovel

Hey, so the story is far from GPT, it's all very original and reflects an original story I've been trying to get on paper for a very long time. I finally found the courage to do so and just looking for honest feedback, if it's looking GPTish then tell me what I've done wrong in my writing style...

Thank you so much for this feedback!! I will definitely implement, your thoughts and spend a little more time building the world from the beginning instead of along the way. I can see how this would be a little misleading.

Hey Scribble Hub! ?? I’m Kevin, a new author here and excited to be part of this amazing community of storytellers and readers. I just uploaded the first five chapters of my new fantasy series The Twelve, and would love your feedback! ? Quick hook: What if 353,000 people were gifted elemental...

Perfect, thank you again for such amazing feedback! Sure! If you have time to read chapter 2 and provide feedback, I would really appreciate it! Chapter 2: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1744169-the-twelve/chapter/1756686/

Thank you so much! I really appreciate you!

This is amaaazing feedback, I really needed this. I was really seeking to see if chapter one is too much of a mystery and maybe more explanation is needed to set the foundation for the world building. You're absolutely right about the formatting with characters, as I was writing, I was beginning...

Hey! Do you think you can take a look at the first chapter of my ongoing series? I would love to know what you think about the word building and if this chapter hooks you into the story. I would also love to see if this makes you want to wait around for chapter two because if it makes you want...

Hey everyone! I’m currently developing a new anime-inspired fantasy novel called The Twelve, and I’d love some honest feedback on Chapter 1. Very brief synopsis: Hidden at the edge of the world lies a secret society where descendants of twelve elemental bloodlines protect humanity from threats...

Hey! Do you think you can take a look at the first chapter of my story? I would love to know what you think about the word building and if this chapter hooks you into the series? I would also love to see if this makes you want to wait around for chapter two because if it makes you want to check...