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People turn into the most diabolical haters of all time when things are going to great. Sometimes the switch up is crazy?

As long as you can weave these elements together perfectly you don't have to worry too much about tags. A good story will market itself

I would say that more would be appreciated, and if you are scared that they might be expectant of 5k every chapter, you can write a concluding note as to why the chapter was long today (There should be a level of communication with your readers so that you can easily compromise with them about...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1238516/rise-of-the-crime-lord/ I need feedback on my novel. Please review, like, and comment. I appreciate any critiques that can help me refine and improve the story. Thank you very much for taking your time to give me feedback. I appreciate it a lot

Thank you very much. Sorry if I made a mess by posting it on other forums I didn't mean to spam.

Im not ready to post the story yet, I want to see people's opinions and feedback before I publishing. I want to write down 21 chapters down before I start publishing, I am new to writing I also would want to get used to it, before I subject myself to a schedule I can't conform to. I don't want...

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How does one delete a thread? Sorry, I am new here. I have not yet published it; I want to write 21 chapters before I start publishing since I'm new to writing. What is your thought on chapter 3

CHAPTER THREE: THE VOTE "Based on the votes, except for Hans and a few other groups, the union has unanimously agreed to withhold any conflict with the syndicate," Valentina announced as the grin on her face extended to her cheeks. However, Hans was on the opposite spectrum; his expression...

Thank you, I didn’t see it I have posted it on story feedback, please give me your feedback over there

CHAPTER THREE: THE VOTE "Based on the votes, except for Hans and a few other groups, the union has unanimously agreed to withhold any conflict with the syndicate," Valentina announced as the grin on her face extended to her cheeks. However, Hans was on the opposite spectrum; his expression...

CHAPTER THREE: THE VOTE "Based on the votes, except for Hans and a few other groups, the union has unanimously agreed to withhold any conflict with the syndicate," Valentina announced as the grin on her face extended to her cheeks. However, Hans was on the opposite spectrum; his expression...

Thank you very much, sometimes I feel like if I take my time, every single thing would become overly descriptive such as clothes, food, accessories, festivals, and locations.

Thank you very much for the critique, it didn’t come off as negative in any way, it’s better to receive actual criticism on how to improve instead of false praise. I will do my best to improve, I don’t know any writing groups that I can join that can help me with the story.

CHAPTER 2: THE CRIME UNION (LOOKING FOR AN EDITOR NB: I CAN ONLY START PAYING AFTER I START EARNING FROM THE NOVEL. SORRY) The neon lights brushed against Leon's face; the rain fell from the sky, and as the heavy downpour fell upon his shoulders, it reminded him of the burdens that lay on him...