Recent content by ThanksALot

Nice thanks for the feedback. Late reply but I did try to make it short and reduce descriptions on dialogue. Also did short paragraphs. It was to make it easier to read on a phone as I also used my phone to type it. It did fail though and I can see it being confusing. Thanks!

I wouldn't be here if I didn't like reading and writing 'trash' lol Probably need to tag it. AI text does trigger plagiarism checks and stuff especially if you use it to write articles lol (Which is ironic cause the check is AI too lol).

It's not as good anymore cause they nerfed it. Plus the writing will feel very samey if lots of people use this lol. Also just because it has a lot of data doesn't mean its good. For example game engine codes it gives out tend to be newbie level.

Your opinion would be appreciated Here I'm planning out a new story and I want it to be better so I'm gathering feedback.

Pretty sure his name is Jake. Guess that shows how forgettable the characters are.

The fever dream is over. The well of dreams has dried up. Was planning to write more volumes for this story but I ran out of steam. There's also the fact that it's not that good of a story. The professionals do say most people's first stories will suck and it seems I'm not an exception to that...

Maybe because you posted 3 chapters too close to each other? Did that happen to your other updates before?

It has cringe metaphors and then you hear okay all of a sudden. Even if it wasn't Lord of the rings, the way they speak makes it feel out of place. P.S. Man, where did the 1 billion go? The armors are so trash. I guess it looks pretty in some shots, but the concept arts were so much better...

JUSTIFIED? That's weak sauce! You have to use all the tools available. THIS WAY YOUR TEXT WILL STAND OUT!

You use the basic dialogue tags. Don't go search for synonyms of said. When there's a bunch of characters, you use quite a lot of them. Most authors use it once, then keep the flow. E.g. "Hello!" said Char1 "Hi!" said Char2 "First one who beats the other guy gets 5000 dollars," said Char3...

Nice!

Hmm, Alright, I could have sworn it worked before. But I tried it now, and it didn't I must be out of my mind. How do I remove this thread cause it's not a bug then.

Oh, so that means this is outdated? https://forum.scribblehub.com/help/bb-codes/ Also, it works when you don't use edit. That's why I thought it's a bug. Edit: Still doesn't work

In editor: What it looks like outside:

Opposite for me lol I came from reading only literary fiction and published genre fiction to now reading what snobs regard as trash. Oh, and manga. Lots of it.