Recent content by Tejoka

Wait, there's a season 2 out? Oh, I guess I need to make more time ... Anyway, I really liked season 1 especially for the way it subverted some common superhero tropes while at the same time showing some (relatively?) realistic stuff regarding corporations, corruption etc. It's a good example...

Well, I never set out to subvert any specific tropes, but it sort of happens since I'm doing my own thing with the cultivation genre. Off the top of my head, tropes I'm subverting for the xianxia/cultivation and transmigration genre: The MC is originally from the fantasy world, and was...

Pineapple on pizza, of course! I haven't tried the other one but that would probably get messy. :blob_frown:

I'd love a review, too. Thanks a lot! I'd especially like feedback on the plot and characters, since I'm confident in grammar and style.

Realistically, we're (most of us) hobby authors and can't always do extensive research. But I agree that a basic respect for other cultures we use should be there. Even if you're just creating your own societies inspired by them, at least try to make sure it doesn't come across as insulting...

My story, Reverse Reincarnation, has only 6.8k views here, even if it's currently 230 pages. Maybe I should have done more marketing.

Stylistically, I'd recommend that you try to avoid adverbs and adjectives and replace them with verbs where you can. Not at all costs, though. Also, look for synonyms for words (there are online thesaurus websites) and try to change your vocabulary up a bit and avoid repeated words, just don't...

Hi, and welcome to the site! I'll take your offer. Thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/143401/reverse-reincarnation/ Your story sounds interesting. If I have time, I'll give it a read.

Yeah, sorry for my part, I realized that just now, too. Back on topic. I think the most important takeaway for authors reading this is that there is some controversy, and it's possible - although people disagree over how likely it is - that Patreon could be affected. Perhaps it makes sense to...

Sorry, there were more quotes I wanted to reply to, but this is already getting too large. As someone from Germany who's interested in our history, reading the comparisons thrown around here is, bluntly, sickening. I've been to a concentration camp memorial. It's not something you easily...

Of course, everyone's an individual. If you know how to write good characters, that's almost universal. But there are differences, often subtle. I usually get a feeling for if a female character was written by a man, there's just something a little off about it (often, not always). This is...

I'd also love to get a review, feedback is always appreciated! My story: Reverse Reincarnation It has 25 chapters right now, read as many as you like. Thank you!

I'll just throw a few out here: Alexander Damien Guillaume Jerome Vincent Nicolas Albert Daniel Roger Charles Lucas Edward Nathaniel Leonard

I think it depends on what time period this is set in, or what time period it resembles. If there's a kind of 'military academy' at all, it probably isn't middle ages, right? Maybe take a look at what happened for 18th or 19th century military. I think most of the officers there were from the...

I wouldn't call it paranoid exactly, but she's definitely cautious and cool-headed, and the transmigration did affect her. Interesting to read everyone's answers. It looks like there are less 'normal people' than not.