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I can understand what you’re trying to convey, but I struggled to visualize anything from the opening line.

I've browsed a lot of other-site forums and have asked similar questions, I've seen wide ranges of answers. Some people say they write...

@Tarrow See how there are others here pointing out to not permit others dictate how to write? That's not a suggestion or a rule; that's...

Human language has proven so pernicious. Not only does it have a ton of rules, but even if you take them all into account, it still...

It was an ebil protagonist, so I attracted that crowd.

I wish I knew about keeping things simple. (KISS) Keep it simple, stupid. I made a huge plot with lots of characters for my first novel...

The type of things you learn months/years later and kick yourself for not knowing earlier. Just thought it would be interesting to ask.

I have this really cool idea with the rankers in the novel that the reason they are S Rank is because the main antagonists created...

For me it just depends on the mood I wake up in. I have times where I can barely manage to write 1000~ words over the span of a week...

Still, A+ for putting it in the right subforum. :blob_highfive:

Thanks for the critique! I plan to do a lot of editing to the current chapters in my spare time so I will take the "trim the dialogue"...

First of all, the chapter starts strong. Death’s motivation is clear. He comes across as unlikeable, but he has urgency and he is still...

Where is the story link? You have to post that when requesting reviews. Because you can't see signatures in a mobile browser.

I'm new to forums, didn't know mobile couldn't see, thank you for telling me ^^ Edited my post to include it

I don't have a lot of friends who read and I personally find it really hard to review my own works. I keep all of my old chapters saved...