Recent content by Tananas143

Thank you for taking your time. All your critiques are very valid and worth looking into. I’m going to reformat the chapters into a more appealing way before I completely give up on this story. For some of those grammatical errors I actually remember some of the ones you pointed out, but I guess...

Thank you for your feedback. I was also thinking about breaking it down to smaller paragraphs since that seems to be the prefer style for web novels.

Ahh...I can understand. Do you know how many times, I used that trick lol. The thing that’s destroys my sleep schedule are those damn cliffhangers. Once I get through one another pops up! Sigh... STAY STRONG ?!

Hello! I just posted my first story, Welcome to Alternia, and I wanted to see if anyone likes it because I been having doubts. I don’t mind if you don’t like it and I actually encourage you do give your honest thoughts. So, please give me any feedback!

What I usually do is try to stay up as long as possible and then go to sleep, I do this and then extend the time I stay up each day to longer and longer(maybe hour increments or whatever you think you can handle). At the same time, I get up earlier and earlier. Do this until you are at the sleep...