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For me AI editing for things like checking grammar and punctuation, asking it to look for overly repeating word choice, or asking it to...

First off, thank you for the offer to critique :D Always looking for feedback and ways to improve...

Sure, hit me! Not a comedy mind, so if you skip for that fair enough :D...

Not unsafe? Why would I feel threatened by them? Im just curious about the story visibility. But damn, scribbles took down all tags? Sucks.

So its been a while, and I figured it was just a mistake, but did GW clamp down or send a threatening letter? Why has the 40k fandom and...

Always looking to improve, edited several chunks based on a roasters review too. Please and thank you...

Always looking for a critique to improve! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915090/shadows-in-the-sand-warhammer-/ As for inspiration...

It really wasnt intended for a general audience, I write primarily to sharpen my skills :D As for the atmo, I can agree with trimming...

I read two chapters, which in this case means I was lovingly volunteered to read what is essentially eight chapters smuggled across the...

First off, thank you for your time! And I can see the issues, chapter 2's length came about because I had scenes in my head and I was...

Always looking for feedback, anything to help me improve! Please and thank you :D...