Recent content by Sylver

I finished my story a few years back and I felt satisfied, with a hint of pride. Cuz I did it, I wrote my own story! :blob_paint: So now I'm rewriting it here :blobrofl: cuz I felt it needed one. I'm more proud of it, but act 1 needs some adjustments. I guess the first act is tricky for me cx...

Is it called the mall because when you're going to one store, you're going to them all? :blob_frown:

I-I don't fully understand this poll x) But in short; if the male MC didn't rescue a stray cat, it would completely change the story.

I'm dyslexic so it's forever appreciated when a reader points out spelling and Grammer mistakes for me <3

I presented something in the story as an adorable gimmick, something cliche to start the story in a fun, slice of life romance fantasy. Later in the story, I ripped off the veil and revealed what that silly gimmick actually meant in a super messed up origin. Like a Soilet Green is people...

Not a retcon, one if my characters is a werewolf but my world has 3 moons, and this also extends the number of days where she loses control and becomes a werewolf. I just struggle to keep that in mind :blob_sweat: even though she should revert back to human by day and werewolf by night, I keep...

Did any of you catch that blood moon late last night? :blob_aww: I did... at the cost of waking up late for work heh :blob_sweat::blob_whistle:

My story is not about being a guy :blob_uwu: but I get what you mean haha. Noted! Aw thank you! :blob_gift:

Hiya :blobspearpeek: Monster Girls and Smut are kinda my thing. How can I help you?

Vocal criticism! Vocal criticism! I'd rather be forward and see where my faults are then to be left guessing. But you need to have thick skin for that :blob_teehee: however, it depends on the criticism. If it's catching plot holes or questioning character changes, then yea it would be helpful...

Thank you, O wise and powerful Corty! *bows out of respect* 🙏 Ah yea :sweat_smile: it's hard to read cuz of the small size we have on the site for the cover image, but maybe changing the colors would help like you suggested. I love the cover, courtesy of an amazing artist and friend...

Hi @Corty ! I'd love it if you could provide feedback on my story based on the five points you mentioned!

I wanted to write a romance smut story with a cat girl as the main protagonist. And although I'm grateful for the audience I have now, I feel that progress has stagnated on gaining new readers for a good while now:( I want to agree that sex sells, and harem and smut does help boost your views...

I'm #82 on Trending/Ranking I know it's not as big as #1 but it's a feat for me ?? Still worth a glass of wine for the occasion hehe :blob_teehee::blob_sir: