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Thank you for reading Chapter 1! Need to clarify a few things:
Setting misunderstanding: This is Ottoman-inspired fantasy, not Persian or Arabian. "Desert prince" doesn't fit since Altan was born in the Sultan's palace, and the Zafer Empire is much larger than a...
Hi everyone! ? This is my first LitRPG novel, and I’ve just posted a few chapters so far. I’m super nervous but really eager to hear your thoughts!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1826221/sultan-supremacy-sytem/
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