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    need some feedback of the 2 first chapters I've wrote.

    Immediately started re-writing the chapters after I've seen this 2 hours ago, I'll take what you and others suggested into account and leave the "looking for something to latch onto." vibe that Fairemont appreciated. Thanks for the help!
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    need some feedback of the 2 first chapters I've wrote.

    i changed it, hope you like it thanks! I've updated both the synopsis and the cover. In the earlier chapters I am trying to showcase the main character and do some lil world building there and there Thanks for the feedback!
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    I thought i somehow got 55 views

    it was just me checking my story page non-stop LOL (views came from my country and whenever i reload the page it adds up) i was excited too bruhh
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    need some feedback of the 2 first chapters I've wrote.

    been cooking up this story for a lot of years and just now I've decided to write it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1622673/cannon-the-mouse/
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