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    Fairy Feedback v2

    Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I will use everything you told me and reform my story.
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    Fairy Feedback v2

    Hello! Thank you for offering to go through and review everyones stories. I'd like to throw mine into the mix too. Let me know how I did. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1107409/the-reincarnated-swordsman-is-a-genius-mage/
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    Feedback on my story

    Hello This is my first attempt at writing a story and as I've finished the first "Arc/Volume" I wanted some feedback on how I can improve and make the next part better. Any advice is welcome https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1107409/the-reincarnated-swordsman-is-a-genius-mage/
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