Aye, the you and I are the same person with dual-consciousness trying to control the same body and tell the story from their perspective. And thank you very much for the feedback!
Would you accept reading my first chapter on Google Docs? I haven't submitted it as a story on Scribble Hub because I deemed it a failure and abandoned it months ago. However, it'd do more good receiving feedback than brushing it off as a complete failure.
It was an experiment I excitedly wanted...
Definitely windows xp. My grandparents had this old computer that had Windows XP. I wrote on Microsoft Word, played ROBLOX, and everything on that piece of archaic junk. Man I miss the start-up sound.