Recent content by SuiPolaris

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    First Chapter Analysis

    Aye, the you and I are the same person with dual-consciousness trying to control the same body and tell the story from their perspective. And thank you very much for the feedback!
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    First Chapter Analysis

    First chapter: Collective
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Would you accept reading my first chapter on Google Docs? I haven't submitted it as a story on Scribble Hub because I deemed it a failure and abandoned it months ago. However, it'd do more good receiving feedback than brushing it off as a complete failure. It was an experiment I excitedly wanted...
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    Which version of Windows makes you feel the most nostalgic?

    Definitely windows xp. My grandparents had this old computer that had Windows XP. I wrote on Microsoft Word, played ROBLOX, and everything on that piece of archaic junk. Man I miss the start-up sound.
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