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Thanks for the great feedback and for taking the time to point out my flaws, back to the drawing board! :D

Thanks for the feedback :) 10/10!

Would you be so kind to give me feedback on Reverberation :)

Hmm, it was a book about two teen boys traveling a sort of "future society" before they understood that they liked each other... Ah it was a mess :D

For me, I'm just confused by the first two paragraphs as I have no connection to what a Yriah is or where Antoria is :) Maybe focus on the oath it self and explain the race/place thing in the world-building chapters?

Coffee and hope I would say :)

Hello new author here :) Would love some critique on my story, Reverberation People seem to find it boring and not engaging, so please shed some light on that as a reader. :) Thanks!

Hello, Would love some critique on my story, Reverberation People seem to find it boring and not engaging, so please shed some light on that as a reader. :) Thanks!