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    Readers Block or Having Trouble with Plot Progression?

    A very common stereotype about girls who like badboys is that those girls like badboys who are gentle only with them. You can use this as a fundamental guideline for their date. On the date, you can create a scenario where the goddess sees a ritual that the demon god's worshippers are...
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    Readers Block or Having Trouble with Plot Progression?

    Well, this went sideways... Anyways, if your looking for suggestions on how Hera can manipulate the other dieties so that they do not get together and try to take Hera down, it shouldn't be too hard. They've already been discussing past betrayals from what I gather from your message. Therefore...
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    Readers Block or Having Trouble with Plot Progression?

    So, which is the part that you're having trouble writing? Do you need suggestions as to how you can improve the scene in which the deity that Hera tricked shares her knowledge? If so, what do you want the scene to convey? Sadness? Shock? Any other emotion?
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    Readers Block or Having Trouble with Plot Progression?

    Hi Guys, If you're having readers block or trouble with plot progression, feel free to leave a description of your story, the area of story or plot point your having issues with, and what goal you would like to accomplish with the plot point and I will give suggestions on how you can go forward...
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

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    Do you like stories about intelligent Mc's and the Mafia?

    I recently started posting my novel, DON, which has gotten good feedback. I would appreciate some feedback. Also, if you like the story, leave a review for an extra chapter before it's posted on the website.
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