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    Feedback on the first few microchapters please?

    Sure but I'm thinking of starting over though
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    Feedback on the first few microchapters please?

    Well I was hoping quicker feedback — I don't wanna be 30 chapters in to have to burn it all down... Plus, I thought the length of a tweet is perfect for busy people nowadays.
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    Feedback on the first few microchapters please?

    I'm seeking someone who reads like a knife and isn't afraid to cut! Wycked Wyrd — fantasy, erotica, horror, maybe even sacred blasphemy depending on how deep you read. I'm not asking, "Do you like it". But: Where did it lose you? What felt fake or forced? What emotion (if any) did it drag out...
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