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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Thanks for the feedback, now I know what to improve. And is it repetitive if you always mention a name? (That's why I've been mentioning hairs and eyes. Lmao!)
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    This thread looks like it makes you want to improve your story... Mind if I join in? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/wielder/ Just a quick reminder: my first chapter is short and English is not my first language.
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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    Ohhh...
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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    Welp, I better use my brain to make my plot better~ thanks for the feedback by the way. ?
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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    Mind if I join in? I'm a newbie writer and English is my second language. Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/sword-king/
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    Free feedback thread. No Gl or smut, or incest. NO INCEST! (Closed)

    Are two chapters okay? Mine is a fantasy, action, and adventure. No incest or anything you mention. If you're interested here's mine. Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/sword-king/
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    BL/LGBT/Fantasy Story Looking for Feedback

    I'll be up for a review swap! Mine's only a fantasy and I'll read four chapters of your work because mine is only one chapter since it just got released? is that okay? If it is okay, then here's mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/sword-king/
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    I wanna know someone's thoughts about my first fiction

    Thank you for critique? I'm still editing it though. Hahaha!
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    I wanna know someone's thoughts about my first fiction

    My first fiction just got released and I don't know if I'm doing good or not? Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/sword-king/
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    Free Constructive Review(closed)

    Hi! I just started my new novel and would like to hear your thoughts and the k you for doing this ? Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/515091/sword-king/
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