Recent content by Shneedlewoods

First things first, thank you for you feedback. I see, i have to make a few things more clear. Mackenzie is the mc, and the narrator. The transcript is supposed to be a Psyscript actually. Meaning, what ever she thinks turns into the text you're reading. Something she wants to send through the...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1750005/ground-zero--zero-grounding/ I would love some feedback. No need to be gentle. Just tell me what you think.

Hey ya'll, i might just be a little overexcited, but i desperately wanna know whether my story hits in any way or not. It feels like there is a lot potential, but since what I wrote is my first try, and English is not my first language, I'd love to know where i stand. And to be 100% honest, I...